FIRST FITY FOCUS
I understand how it feels to constantly second-guess yourself while working on a novel—and how tempting it is to give up when you’re unsure of the next step. Analysis paralysis is a thing in this craft! It’s heartbreaking how many manuscripts with incredible potential remain stuck on a hard drive or gathering dust on a shelf.
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That’s why I created First Fifty Focus, a comprehensive assessment designed to uncover the potential in your novel's first fifty pages and to provide you with a clear, actionable path forward.
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For a flat rate of $297, First Fifty Focus includes:
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A 4-6 page detailed analysis of your First Fifty pages focusing on themes, pacing, narrative flow, structure, imagery and descriptive language, use of concrete details, emotional resonance, character introductions, and reader engagement. Also includes a summary of strengths, weaknesses, and specific suggestions for improvement.
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A 45-minute consultation via phone or Zoom, where we’ll discuss the review, brainstorm alterations, and map out what’s ahead for your manuscript.
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A recording of the consultation, so you can revisit our conversation anytime.
I take a limited number of clients each month, so don’t wait to secure your spot. Let’s transform those First Fifty pages into the powerful opening your story deserves.
Ready to make your First Fifty shine?
Questions? info@writestartfictionstudio.com
Basic Critique Package
For authors looking for big-picture feedback without a full edit. What's working in your story? What isn't? Are you on the right track? Is it a strong enough start? Let's talk about it!
Included Services:
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In-depth critique focusing on themes, imagery, details, emotions, structure, character introduction, pacing, and flow. Summary of feedback with suggestions for improvement (3-6 pages, depending on chosen pages)
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Does not include in-line edits
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Does not include consultation
First Pages (up to 4,000 words): $79
First Chapters (up to 12,000 words): $197
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Submission Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font
Questions? info@writestartfictionstudio.com
Line Edit Package
This package focuses on clarity at the line and paragraph levels to ensure the manuscript’s text is polished and professional. For authors confident in their content.
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Thorough line edit to address grammar, diction, and syntax and to tighten the prose
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1-page summary of overall strengths and weaknesses and suggestions for improvement
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Light copyedit to check for punctuation and spelling
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2 passes of edits before returning to client
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Does not include proofing
First Pages (up to 4,000 words): $79
First Chapters (up to 12,000 words): $197
Submission Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font
Questions? info@writestartfictionstudio.com
À La Carte Services
Tailor the editing process to your specific needs.
Additional Pages or Chapters:
Extend the editing services to additional chapters beyond the initial package. Ideal for those who have fewer than 4,000 words (e.g. short story) or who want editing beyond the first 12,000. For this service, you may choose either the critique package or the line edit.
Pricing: $7 per page.
Submission Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font
One-on-one Consultation Calls:
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To discuss your manuscript in greater detail or answer questions
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To brainstorm new content or changes to edited content
Pricing: $149 per 45-minute session
Additional Revision Rounds:
Extra rounds of revision beyond the standard line editing service, where I provide further feedback after you've made revisions.
Pricing: $3 per page.
Fast-Track Service:
Expedited editing services for a quicker turnaround time. Authors with tight deadlines, email to discuss timelines.
Pricing: $100 additional fee
Questions? info@writestartfictionstudio.com
Extras
​Sample Edit Service
Get a feel for April’s editing style with a complimentary sample edit of 3 pages. This sample includes a detailed line edit that tightens, refines, and clarifies sentence structure and word choice. Content feedback is also provided through a brief editorial letter.
Pricing: Free
Submission Guidelines
Format: Times New Roman, double-spaced, 12-pt. font,
Microsoft Word (no Apple Pages)
Save file: Author Last Name_Manuscript Title_Editing Package (e.g. Austin_Pride and Prejudice_Critique Package)
